わらべうたとゆかいな日々
わらべうた 長崎のこと スモーク(くん製)


Today to relax, try to write the dream I had last night. (I wrote)
Today to relax, I will write the dream I had last night.(Teacher was re-written)

The dream is a scary story.
The dream is scary.

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My dream

I driving a car,and stopped a service station.
I was driving a car,then I stopped at a service station.

Two men worked in the service station.

May be , worker and owner.
Maybe , worker and owner.

A woker give a lot of gas.
The worker filled my car with gas.

So a owner said me, the car’s bearing was broken.
Then the owner said to me” you’re car’s bearing is broken”.

And I asked him change a new bearing.
So I asked him to change the bearing.

After, I goes the service station room by pay a bill
Afterwards,I went inside the service station to pay my bill.

A owner was kill in the room by a blue cutter.
I saw the owner stabbed to death by the worker using a blue cutter.

Take about being scared, I run off the room.
Talk about being scared! I ran out of the room!

I ran for dear!!
I ran for dear life!!

I met two Korean on my way.

I told an affair by Korean.
I told The koreans what happened.

They cannot understand an affair.
They cannot understand me.

And I ran for dear.
And I ran for dear life again!

I try telephone call my son.
I tried to call my son.

But I didn’t remember his phone number.
But I cannot remember his phone number.

The End.

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I think , I need to rest.

The story had to 2 hours .
The story was for 2 hours.

May be, the dream story have write in a good sentence or not?
Maybe,the dream story was written in good sentences or not?

I will,I ask my teacher this soty.
I will ask my teacher.

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Today mouning was absent but I can homework. study well.
This morning I was absent but I did my homework and studied.


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